It sounds good, but it is not very structured (this isn't bad, but I simply feel like more structure in the music in my ears right now) Of course the parts 01:26 - 01:55 and 02:33 - 03:12 and 03:50 - 05:00 sound best, I can't make a decent comment on the rest, it sounds.. strange, not very interesting, nothing I could move my body to.. The instruments/sounds are all fine btw. In any case you should work with the passages I mentioned, they're most probably worth it. Thanks for the track! Regards, qubodup