Production sounds more organic, almost like a band laying it down together; guitars solid, clean good feel great phrasing, synth horns sound almost real, drums are simple but effective and funky enough; don't want to sound negative but truth is its the vocals-the tone and the lyrics and not very funky phrasing-to put it another way she doesn't seem to be having fun which funk is so much about, yes?, pitch seems okay but no dynamics to speak Or ha! to sing of; arrangements are pretty solid, clean and not messy. Overall there's some real promise here, the instruments- especially the guitar are on the money and little sign of the overplaying that self-produced, talented players can easily fall victim to and which clutter up and disrupt the idea that good funk is as much about spaces and restraint than ego and chops, but I would suggest you rethink the vocals and the cheezy lyrics, every funk tune should not have to reinvent the wheel while informing the audience constantly that funky jams-and only funky jams-is where its at, baybee.
Overall a above average outing into p-funk land that would be mebbe a 9 w/more focused and much more unh! unh! factor if you can dig it!