Guys sounds like you are trying to hard to make this track work, all you have done it, that it sounds over done,musically wise, vocals wise, the so called singer, sounds totally stupid, sounds like daffy duck on helium.. Guys listen to this track yourself and see what I mean, and redo it, and make sure the guy who sings either get rid off him, or that daft put on voice for starters..And sing properly would be even better.. More realistic for starter with strong, compelling vocals, with rage,doom whatever in it. And calm down a bit on the manic, chaotic music. And then you might get somewhere...
ps guys I not trying to be mean or bad, just trying to help you see, where you are going wrong. hope this helps some way...