There are good ideas in your music. Unfortunately, technically, it is weak, especially the voice which needs to be worked more - especially your clean voice - and the drums: rhythmically, it is often "backwards" the music while it should lead the other musicians. However, as I said, there are good riffs, good transitions and interesting alternations between strong and calm passages. A vals for the trees is the btter track. so to my mind, it's really worth it to go further in your work. remedy lane