This is pretty good, especially for a first demo! Good quality ambient/symphonic black metal, very atmospheric with moments of intensity, a fine example of the genre. No vocals on here though, but it works fine without them and may even appeal to people who would enjoy the atmosphere and feel of this sort of music but are put off by black metal's usual shrieked vocals. Definitely worth checking out, will look forward to a full length!
Please stay courteous and be sincere (for good and bad!). It can be an interesting read for others, but only if it is constructive and doesn't disparage the artist.
Please write about the music itself and don't be too hard on the sound quality of some demos.