Endearing first attempt. There was something about it that I liked and I was hooked to listening through. But it is a first attempt. I think you showed heart with your guitar playing and vocals, and a great deal of enthusiasm. I think with the attempt at a completely acoustic recording, though, your sounds, especially in "Busdriver" were too distant and faded. I did like the whole plan, though, for that song, with the train sound through the whole track and all the other sounds going really well together. You actually have a very nice singing voice but you don't always match it with the music which makes for some uncomfortable listening such as in "Perfect Body." Sometimes the way you sang seemed to indicate that you were just playing around. The evidence of the big echoey building is quite clear, which wasn't helpful to your endeavors. I imagine that by now your techniques will be refined so that the recordings will be smoother and a better listen. I plan on looking for more of your music as I have some interest in it.