Some sounds are catchy, build up, but this is a single, one track, better get some stuff together, like that, no way. But thanks for sharing anyways, work on it.
Says it all, obviously not an album, but for a first track from someone who openly admits its experimental, quite an adventurous foray into the field of music. Nice one, thanks!-)
Please stay courteous and be sincere (for good and bad!). It can be an interesting read for others, but only if it is constructive and doesn't disparage the artist.
Please write about the music itself and don't be too hard on the sound quality of some demos.