I definitely like the style, I have some critics though.
It start really well and builds up nicely but
1) the arpeggio that comes at 1:52 is too repetitive, it breaks a bit the flow,
2) the arpeggio goes to minor chord (the last longer measure), and I really was anticipating a major one, got a bit disappointed, perhaps neither a minor or major one would have been best to let the listener decides,
3) the additional brief rhythmic click-clack sounds starting at 2:08 is too shuffled in my opinion.
Otherwise as I said I do like it and listened to it several times.
Nil
Please stay courteous and be sincere (for good and bad!). It can be an interesting read for others, but only if it is constructive and doesn't disparage the artist.
Please write about the music itself and don't be too hard on the sound quality of some demos.