Joined : August 10, 2007
I like to start off with the things that I think could use improvements. Some of your lyrics seam a little forced and take me out of the feeling of the song and a lot of the songs have a very similar rhythm. I tend to like a little more variety. On a whole your lyrics are good despite what I said above and your voice is quite pleasant. On a whole it's a good album. The best song is spider man. I hope to hear more from you in the future.



