Anna, I really like your voice. You have a lot of potential indeed, but, yes there is always a but, you definitely need work on your breathing and voice control. Of course, a proper studio, or at least better microphone set up would be able to prevent some of the volume issues with your voice. Certainly a good first effort and don't let my criticism dampen your spirits. You keep writing those songs. I like the lyrics. The guitar was a little simple for my liking, which also interferes with you being able to concentrate on your singing. Maybe lay the guitar track down first, then add your voice. You can certainly build upon this piece with a nice drum and violin accompaniment, in my opinion. I would like to hear more from you in the future Anna.