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Actually quite good. But the music always starts only. And then nothing happens. But u could do it.
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hope you'll be a little older sometime. Still sounds like child's voice. Best wishes
Try a song without piano or a instrument.
The piano has to much notes. You can sing. Stay simple in the melody. U have the perfect songwriter voice. Wish u success.
I love this sentiment. well done
Music for men or alpha animals that carry their brains in the pants and music for women who want to chat with them.
Musik für Männer oder Alphatiere, die ihr Gehirn in der Hose tragen und Musik für Frauen, die sich mit ihnen unterhalten wollen.